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No. No, Daddy. Please not there!
I had a very evil six word story jump in my head today. Here is a version of it.

Revisit 11/24/12

If I keep putting these into six words I don't have to process so much. However, if I produce a series of disturbing Six Word Stories what's the point of not just writing a long editorial?

This is a story titled "The Reality of Manipulating an Innocent Child": [link]
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:icondna-the-authoress:
Your title was used in my six word story/found poem here: [link]
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segura2112 Nov 23, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That is a very dark and twisted, must have come out of that drark and twisted corner most of us have, as much as we would like deny doesn't make it any less so. I'm not going to thank you for this but I will fave it.
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TheIndigoFeather Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very chilling
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Dang...that's disburbing.....Instant sad face....
Very effective story. ^_^ Great job!
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Not-worth-it Nov 19, 2012  Student Writer
I read this two ways.

Obviously, one being the paedophilic way.

The other, he's putting them in the naughty room or some place they're terrified of.

Nicely done.
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Birdkiller Nov 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Yeah, the original six word story that popped in my head was much worse. However, this one still creeps me out.
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Not-worth-it Nov 19, 2012  Student Writer
Indeed, indeed. I'm curious though. What was the original one?

/raises eyebrow.
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Kalyblu Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm curious too...
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