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And she was there.
Posed casually just beyond the counter. The look on her face, her indeterminate eyes, all promised nothing. In that bank stood the impossible dream of every heterosexual boy or man for which the blonde-haired-blue-eyed bombshell had never been more than a dud.
Thomas hadn't noticed that he'd stopped, he hadn't noticed that he was staring, but the man waiting in front of him noticed a stranger had just muttered the words " She's flawless".
Thomas couldn't contain himself to just thinking it. It had to be said.
In this barely noticed and reaction-free moment, for Thomas Corley, there existed perfection.
Posed casually just beyond the counter. The look on her face, her indeterminate eyes, all promised nothing. In that bank stood the impossible dream of every heterosexual boy or man for which the blonde-haired-blue-eyed bombshell had never been more than a dud.
Thomas hadn't noticed that he'd stopped, he hadn't noticed that he was staring, but the man waiting in front of him noticed a stranger had just muttered the words " She's flawless".
Thomas couldn't contain himself to just thinking it. It had to be said.
In this barely noticed and reaction-free moment, for Thomas Corley, there existed perfection.
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I'm writing a book. In an incredibly unwarranted situation, I rethought the initial meeting of the main character and a female character.
As of today, this is what I have for the first glance.
I have shared absolutely nothing of this book, but I'm going to start releasing a snippet here and a thought there. I don't want to give up too much, but if I can show you how Thomas Michael Corley thinks, reviews, and sees the world, I'll be okay with that.
As of today, this is what I have for the first glance.
I have shared absolutely nothing of this book, but I'm going to start releasing a snippet here and a thought there. I don't want to give up too much, but if I can show you how Thomas Michael Corley thinks, reviews, and sees the world, I'll be okay with that.
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i like the beginning of this book. it draws the reader in.