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Their sex spoke of life's secrets.
I hope I'm doing this "Six Word Story" thing right. I like the idea, I feel like it is a poem, an epigram, and prose, all at once. I feel like they need to be perfect descriptions.

Nonetheless, if I think about it, my mind can be set to think in six-word increments.
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CaptivationRequired Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
You are achieving the six word story thing wonderfully. Your sentence speaks volumes. Thank you for sharing.
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Birdkiller Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Professional Writer
Sometimes, I feel myself thinking in six word stories, but I'm afraid to post them.

I'm glad you like this.
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CaptivationRequired Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
Do so!

Every so often I come up with a slew of them and have considered posting them all together, to see how that goes.
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Eremitik Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Most of the six word stories I have read dont quite live up to the expectation of literature. This is one of the exceptions. Clever, honest and quite true.
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Birdkiller Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional Writer
You have given my story a great compliment. I will live up to your literary expectations in the future, as well.
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Eremitik Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
I read quite a few of your pieces although Sing Scream Whisper was the only one I commented on. I generally comment on everything I favorite, but your work had a depth I wasnt quite prepared to think on the other morning.
I will return to your gallery and look forward to reading more from you.
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skyeyedangel Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012
interesting
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Birdkiller Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Professional Writer
I'm glad you're interested, Shelly.
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UnleashedHeathen Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing.
One day you will rule the world.
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Birdkiller Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Professional Writer
I wrote that tag a long time ago, based of the Bad Religion song... These days, I'm just working to change it.

Your comment made my heart sit a few inches higher in my chest, by the way. Thank you.
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UnleashedHeathen Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Bad religion song? What made it bad?

You`re welcome. I try.
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Birdkiller Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Professional Writer
I thought you were commenting on my tag line which is "I want to conquer the world", which comes from the band "Bad Religion" (classic punk icons) and their 1989 album "No Control" (a personal favorite.
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UnleashedHeathen Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
They sound decent.
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Birdkiller Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Professional Writer
Decent! They're one of the best!
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UnleashedHeathen Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
They make me think of Blood Hound Gang.
I like Aerosmith and Peter Frampton. Stuff like that.
However, the band has potential so I`ll check out some more songs. Which ones do you like most?
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Birdkiller Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Professional Writer
I love punk rock, but it sound like you want more heart. I'd like to give you a selection of songs by a band called The Clash; however, I don't know your stance on vocal. Bad Religion focuses more on vocals with every album, "No Control" is just my favorite. I love "I Want to Conquer the World", "The World Won't Stop", "You" and "Billy" the most. As for Aerosmith and Frampton. I love Fingerprints... It's one of the coolest things ever releases... But I think Aerosmith peaked in 1973 with "Dream On". I think they have a lot of good songs, but "Dream On" is head and shoulders above the rest.
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